Nano progress, post nano

Well this is it. I’ve pushed it back as long as I could but I’ve finally brought City of Ashes elements into the City of Bones rewrite. Namely: Luke’s pack’s headquarters.

It made sense for Luke to bring Clary to his place when he was head of the pack but since I decided to make him closer to the good guy he’s supposed to be (and also the werewolves a bit closer to what actualy happens in the wild aka. supportive families rather than law of the strongest) and take him off that seat, it’s only logical the alpha couple would want to meet the kids they just rescued from a vampires’ hotel.

Nano progress, post nano

You know what, I’m actually going to keep posting extracts from the thing as I go along because it’s fun and allows me to keep track.

(And also because if someone sees a logic fail in there hopefully they’ll point it out xD)

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